Elly: Part 1

by NineSparrow

Preface

Hi all this is my first erotic fiction submission. Thought I'd give it a go. There's more available on my blog, but even though I get thousands of page views, there isn't much comment.

https://ftflaw.wordpress.com

I tried third person, but eventually thought the more intimate first person was the go.

Would like feedback :)


Since the laws were passed Elly found herself getting better grades. It was crazy that being installed in the male toilets, halfway through a wall with her naked bottom half hanging out for any guy to use would actually give her more time to study, but hey, what else could she do while her asshole was being railed so hard that she could barely move?

It was a Thursday afternoon and Elly's last count at how many different cocks had penetrated her was sixty-seven, though in reality it was probably more. The FTF (free to fuck) laws had only been approved for Swallow Falls Highschool two months ago; the boys were having fun with their new activities, she supposed. Prior to the law all men over the age of 18 in the school had to get their daily (though more usually hourly) fucks in before and after the 9am-3:30pm school day, leading to a lot of frustration. For those poor men, 6 ½ hours was the most they'd ever been without a good cumdumpter to drop their load in. Most schools had been picky in enforcing the laws within school grounds in case underage girls were targeted-so the Fuck Station was invented, where year 12 girls over the age of 18 could get some study time while helping the male students for extra credit.

That station was, in essence, a hole in the wall that a girl laid through, with benches and even cold drinks on her side, and her naked lower half on the other for men to pleasure themselves. It was actually quite cushy inside the station, and she usually had fun chatting to the other girls at the stations as well. In that sense, it was social as well, right?

Elly reflected on this while she wrote her debate speech. The debate was on that very issue: should the FTF law be implemented in schools? She had to argue no, though her opinion was opposite. If the law wasn't getting in the way of things then there was no problem, right?

As she penned that argument she felt a new wave of hot cum blast inside her pussy. The hard fucking that had been going on for the last six minutes (this one had lasted a long time!) finally slowed, and the thick, long cock was pulled from her hole. Almost immediately another cock took its place, sliding wetly into her asshole instead. Anal wasn't painful for her-after hard months of fucking she had gotten used to it-so she didn't mind which holes they used. The other boy had probably gone to the clean-up station where other girls would suck him clean. They had the tough jobs-they couldn't write and do a proper clean-up at the same time. But they got better credit and other perks so they enjoyed the job.

Elly finished writing her last dot point just as her wristwatch beeped. That was two hours: time to go to lunch. She patiently waited for guy to finish fucking her asshole, and when a fresh wave of cum washed into her she pushed herself out. The boy was well-built and she recognised him from her class; he nodded to her appreciatively as he went over to the clean-up station. The girls there-naked from head to toe-each had their mouths open, and one eagerly went to work on his sticky cock.

Elly waved to a friend Joy waiting outside the toilets and stretched a little. Wearing nothing but her tiny school skirt, a loose white shirt showing off her 32-D breasts, and the hundred-off strings of cum dripping around her ass and pussy, she went off to meet Joy.

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