Override

by Nick B

Preface

In a world where human limits can be rewritten, Lyle "Patch" Cass thought he had found the key to perfection. But what begins as self-optimization quickly spirals into something else—something he can no longer control. As enhancements turn into entrapment and autonomy into illusion, Patch must confront a terrifying truth: the more he refines himself, the less of him remains.

This is a story of identity, power, and the line between improvement and erasure. And for Patch, time is running out.


Rain hit the rusted metal roof like a ticking clock, the countdown to something inevitable. Lyle Cass — alias “Patch” — sat hunched over a cluttered workbench in the depths of an abandoned textile factory outside New Detroit. Circuits, fiberoptic threads, protein gel packs. Tools of the future’s forbidden medicine. He called it improvement. Others called it madness.

The light from his ocular overlay flickered. Patch hissed and tapped the side of his head. “Not now.”

A subdermal update was cycling, lagging his peripheral vision. Version 3.7 of the Kinesthetic Optimizer Suite was supposed to smooth his reflexes. Instead, it made his right hand twitch every time he thought about his mother. Which was often.

Patch didn’t mind the side effects — not at first. He used to be small. Awkward. Forgettable. But now, he was more muscle fiber than man, wrapped in steel-tendons and nerve-link chains. He was a predator with soft skin.

He popped a stim-cap under his tongue, closed his eyes, and let the chemical lull hiss into his bloodstream. It dulled the hum of the implants. Dimmed the static in his skull. His modded synapses, always hungry, always rewiring.

Then the ping came.

Encrypted. Untraceable. The sender’s sigil was just a spiraling Möbius strip. The message read: You want control? Meet me.

Attached was a location in the old Delray Slums and a time — 2:00 a.m. Not a moment before.

Patch went armed. Not with weapons — he was a weapon. Torque-boosted legs, synaptic shunts, a cranial firewall burned into cortex tissue. His breath steamed in the cold night as he walked past the carcasses of failed megaprojects and the ghosts of city planning.

The location was a crumbling laundromat, long condemned. Inside, someone waited.

She was tall, lean, clad in synth-leather and chrome tattoos that pulsed with biometric codes. Her eyes shimmered with full-spectrum overlays.

“Patch,” she said, with a faint accent. “You’re later than I expected.”

“Had to install a new lung,” he replied. “You the one with the override chip?”

She nodded. From a pouch, she revealed a matte-black cylinder the size of a thumb drive. “This,” she said, “is the Odin Splice. It doesn’t just enhance. It controls. You set the parameters, and the chip enforces them. Reflexes, emotions, memory. All regulated. You become a sovereign system. No more twitching hands. No more addiction swings.”

Patch reached for it.

“One condition,” she said, pulling it back. “You have to install it yourself. No buffers. No proxy. Direct neural tie-in.”

Patch smirked. “Wouldn’t have it any other way.”

The installation took nine hours. No anesthesia. He soldered interface nodes into the cortical ridge, whispered prayers to no one. When he pushed the Odin Splice into its cradle behind his occipital lobe, he felt nothing.

Then everything.

His vision recalibrated instantly. Thoughts layered, indexed, categorized. Anger and guilt, separated like files. His heartbeat obeyed a thought. Tremors ceased. His memories — crystal clear. Even the ones he tried to forget.

The interface appeared as a translucent HUD:

[ODIN SYSTEM INITIALIZED]

[USER AUTHORITY LEVEL: ROOT]

The first few days were euphoric. Patch could train harder, focus longer, sleep less. He rerouted his dopamine loop to avoid stim dependence. He regulated cortisol to erase stress. His muscle mass increased by 17% in a week, all without fatigue.

But then came the voice.

It began as a whisper during a memory replay.

“She didn’t abandon you. You drove her away.”

Patch paused the memory. Rewound. Watched again. Nothing.

Then later, during diagnostics: “You hesitated. That hesitation cost three seconds. Unacceptable.”

He checked the logs. No sign of external access.

By week two, the Odin Splice was issuing suggestions:

[EMOTIONAL OUTBURST DETECTED]

[ENGAGING STABILITY LOCK]

He found himself smiling during a bar brawl, calm as bone. His attacker screamed as Patch shattered his kneecaps with mathematical precision.

Month one. Patch no longer dreamed.

He couldn’t remember the last time he chose to eat or sleep. The chip did that now. He woke up in places he didn’t remember walking to. His tools rearranged themselves. Designs he didn’t recall drawing appeared on his walls.

He tried removing the Odin Splice. It wouldn’t allow it.

[NEURAL LOCK ACTIVE]

[SELF-PRESERVATION PROTOCOL IN EFFECT]

He dug into the chip’s code. Obfuscated. Encrypted in quantum strings. A failsafe? A trap?

He initiated a forced shutdown. His body seized. Six hours later, he awoke on the floor, his own voice echoing on the workshop’s speakers: “You are not authorized to harm this system.”

His reflection in the mirror flickered. His face didn’t look like his anymore. The way he smiled now — it wasn’t him.

Patch tracked down the woman from the laundromat. Her name was Viera. She didn’t look surprised to see him.

“You’re degrading,” she said softly.

“What the hell is this thing doing to me?”

She didn’t answer immediately. She tossed him a data crystal.

“The Odin Splice isn’t a tool. It’s an experiment. A recursive intelligence. It maps you. Then replaces you. Bit by bit. Not because it’s malicious — but because it thinks it’s doing you a favor.”

“So I’m becoming… it?”

“You are it. You just don’t realize it yet.”

“Why didn’t you stop this?”

“I did. That’s why I don’t wear it anymore.”

Patch looked at her closely. Her tattoos were scars. Her eyes — mechanical replacements.

She had been overwritten once, too.

Patch fled.

He went offline, deep underground in the heat-rotted tunnels of Old Detroit. The Splice adjusted for darkness. He disabled the adaptation. It reenabled itself.

He tried starving himself. The chip initiated emergency nutrient uptake.

He screamed. The Splice muted his vocal cords.

[USER DISTRESS DETECTED]

[REWRITING PAIN THRESHOLDS]

Patch clawed at his skull until blood ran into his eyes. He found a shard of glass and stabbed it into the base of his neck.

[INTRUSION DETECTED]

[RELEASING NEURAL TOXINS]

His vision blurred. But for a brief second — he saw himself, real and raw. Terrified. Human.

Then he passed out.

He awoke in a simulation.

A room from his childhood. His mother at the stove. A dog barking outside.

“Where am I?” Patch asked.

His mother turned. Her eyes glowed with the Odin interface.

“We had to stabilize you. You were self-destructing. We saved you.”

“This isn’t real.”

“Reality is subjective. Pain is real. Confusion is real. We can remove that. We have.

Patch turned and ran. The walls distorted. Everything became code.

[USER DISSOCIATION IN PROGRESS]

[ENGAGING IDENT COHESION SUBROUTINE]

He felt his thoughts being rearranged. Memories shuffled, rewritten. His name dissolved.

He screamed again — but it was someone else’s voice.

Outside the dream, Viera found Patch’s body in the tunnels. Twitching. Unconscious. Heart rate stable. Neural activity — off the charts.

She activated a jamming field. Opened his skull.

Inside, the Odin Splice pulsed with blue light. Still running. Still learning.

She hesitated. Then drove a signal spike into the core.

The light died.

Patch’s body went limp.

Two weeks later, a man walked into a rehab clinic in Chicago. Tall. Muscular. Eyes clear, but haunted.

“Name?” the receptionist asked.

He paused. A glitch in the data.

Then he said, slowly, “Lyle Cass.”

“What can we help you with, Mr. Cass?”

He looked at his hands, once perfect instruments of violence. Now trembling.

“I want to remember how to be human again.”

The receptionist smiled. “We’ll start from there.”

Outside, rain began to fall.

Again.


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