The Broken Time

by Preston Ferguson

Chapter 1: The Broken Timepiece

In the quiet town of Windmere, where the streets always smelled of fresh bread and the sea breeze, there was a little shop tucked between a florist and a bakery. Its sign, painted in gold letters, read: “E. Thistlewick, Master Clockmaker.”

Everyone in town knew Mr. Thistlewick could fix any clock, no matter how battered or ancient. But lately, something had changed. The clocks were ticking wrong. Some sped up. Some slowed down. And some, according to the baker’s daughter, started ticking backward.

On a chilly morning, just as fog rolled over the cobblestones, a boy named Finn stood nervously outside the shop. He clutched a strange, heavy pocket watch — a family heirloom — that had stopped ticking the night before. His grandmother had whispered warnings about it:

“Never let it stop, Finn. Never.”

Finn pushed open the door, and a tiny bell jingled overhead. The shop smelled of oil, wood, and time itself. Clocks of every size covered the walls, each ticking in peculiar rhythm.

Behind a large oak counter, a thin man with silver hair and tiny glasses peered at him.

“Ah,” said Mr. Thistlewick, his voice like the creak of old hinges. “You’ve brought… that.”

Finn shivered.

“Can you fix it, sir?” he asked.

The clockmaker’s smile was thin.

“I can… but you must help me. Once you start, there’s no going back.”

Before Finn could ask what he meant, the floorboards under his feet gave a slight shudder — and the clocks on the wall all struck thirteen.

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Chapter 2: The Hidden Room

The clocks’ chimes faded, but the air in the shop buzzed with strange energy. Finn clutched the broken pocket watch tighter.

“Wh-what just happened?” he stammered.

Mr. Thistlewick’s glasses glinted as he turned away.

“Thirteen strikes,” he said calmly. “It means the shop has accepted you.”

“Accepted me for what?” Finn asked, not sure if he wanted the answer.

The old clockmaker didn’t reply. Instead, he reached under the counter and pressed a hidden switch. With a soft groan, the wall behind him swung open, revealing a narrow staircase spiraling downward into darkness.

“Bring the watch,” Mr. Thistlewick said. “And hurry. Time is leaking.”

Finn’s heart hammered against his ribs. Every sensible thought told him to run out of the shop and never look back — but curiosity was stronger. He stepped around the counter and followed Mr. Thistlewick into the hidden passage.

The staircase was lit by dim, flickering lanterns. As they descended, Finn noticed symbols carved into the stone walls — strange markings that looked half like clock gears, half like stars.

Finally, they reached a heavy door made of iron and wood. Mr. Thistlewick took a brass key from around his neck and unlocked it. Beyond was a vast underground room, unlike anything Finn had ever seen.

Giant gears turned slowly in the ceiling. Bronze pipes hissed with steam. Tables were cluttered with blueprints, strange tools, and clock parts that ticked and twitched on their own. And in the center of it all stood a huge, ancient clocktower — but it was upside down, hanging from the ceiling.

“This,” Mr. Thistlewick said, his voice full of reverence, “is the Heart of Time.”

Finn’s eyes widened.

“Is this… is this real?”

“As real as you are,” said Mr. Thistlewick. “And it’s breaking. Your watch was tied to it — a safeguard. But now that it’s stopped…”

He trailed off, and the gears above gave a loud, shuddering creak.

“If we don’t fix it,” the old man whispered, “time will unravel… and Windmere will be the first to disappear.”

Finn stared at the broken pocket watch in his hands, realizing for the first time that it was heavier than just metal and springs. It carried the weight of the whole town.

And somehow, it was up to him to save it.

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Chapter 3: The Apprentice’s Oath

Mr. Thistlewick shuffled across the vast room toward a long table covered in dusty books and rolled-up blueprints. He beckoned Finn closer.

“You can’t fix the Heart of Time alone,” he said. “But with guidance… you might.”

Finn felt dizzy. He was just a boy who delivered bread in the mornings and helped his grandmother in the garden. How could he fix something so huge?

As if reading his thoughts, Mr. Thistlewick opened a heavy, leather-bound book. Inside were diagrams of watches, gears, strange creatures made of metal and mist — and at the center, a drawing of the upside-down clocktower.

“This book,” said the clockmaker, “belonged to the First Apprentice. Every clockmaker of Windmere has chosen an apprentice to pass down the secrets.”

“But… why me?” Finn asked, voice cracking.

Thistlewick’s face grew serious.

“Because you’re the last one who can hear them.”

“Hear who?”

At that moment, a soft whisper brushed past Finn’s ear — like the creak of an old door, like wind turning pages in a forgotten attic. He spun around, but there was no one there. Only the ticking of the clocks… and the faint, ghostly voices hidden inside them.

“The clocks are alive,” Mr. Thistlewick said quietly. “And they are calling for help.”

Finn swallowed hard. Part of him wanted to run — but the bigger part, the braver part, nodded.

“What do I have to do?” he asked.

The old clockmaker smiled for the first time — a real, warm smile. He pulled a silver key from his coat pocket, shaped like a tiny gear.

“Kneel,” he said.

Finn knelt on the cold stone floor. Mr. Thistlewick held the key above his head.

“Do you swear,” the old man said solemnly, “to protect the balance of time? To listen when others cannot? To repair what is broken, even when it frightens you?”

Finn took a deep breath.

“I swear.”

The moment the words left his mouth, the upside-down clocktower above them groaned — but this time, it wasn’t in pain. It was in approval.

The silver key in Mr. Thistlewick’s hand glowed faintly, and when he pressed it into Finn’s palm, it was warm.

“Welcome, Apprentice,” said Thistlewick. “Now… let’s begin your first repair.”

And somewhere, deep inside the Heart of Time, something ancient stirred awake.

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Chapter 4: The Gearhound

Mr. Thistlewick led Finn to a heavy door at the back of the underground workshop. Strange symbols were etched into the wood — symbols that shifted slightly if Finn stared at them too long.

Behind the door, Thistlewick explained, was the First Chamber — where broken fragments of time gathered when something went wrong.

“If you can repair the fracture inside,” said the clockmaker, “you’ll strengthen the Heart. But beware… something else lurks in the chamber.”

Before Finn could ask what, Mr. Thistlewick pushed open the door. Cold, dusty air spilled out.

The chamber beyond was dark except for a faint blue glow that seemed to come from the walls themselves. It was filled with floating shards — like broken pieces of mirrors, each showing a tiny, moving scene: children playing, a cat chasing a bird, a storm gathering over a ship.

At the center, a large gear spun lazily in the air, cracked down the middle.

“That’s the fracture,” said Mr. Thistlewick. “You must repair it with the key.”

Finn stepped into the room, heart pounding. As he did, the silver key in his hand tugged forward, pulling him closer to the broken gear.

But before he could reach it, a low growl echoed through the chamber.

From behind a pile of gears and broken clock faces, a creature emerged — made entirely of twisted metal and snapping springs. It looked almost like a wolf, but its body was a patchwork of rusted parts, and its eyes glowed a fierce, golden yellow.

“A Gearhound,” whispered Mr. Thistlewick from the doorway. “Time’s guardian gone mad.”

The Gearhound snarled, gears grinding against one another, and then leapt toward Finn.

Thinking fast, Finn ducked. The creature skidded across the stone floor, sparks flying. The key in Finn’s hand pulsed — as if urging him to move. Without thinking, Finn turned and pointed the key at the broken gear.

The key shot out a thin thread of silver light that wrapped around the spinning gear. The Gearhound howled and lunged again, but this time Finn focused. He could hear the gear whispering — calling for repair, for balance.

With a yell, Finn twisted the key. The silver light tightened — and with a loud clang, the cracked gear fused back together, whole once more.

Instantly, the Gearhound froze. Its yellow eyes dimmed, and its metal body slowly collapsed into a harmless pile of scrap.

The chamber brightened. The floating shards stopped flickering and hovered peacefully.

Finn stood there, panting, the silver key glowing softly in his hand.

From the doorway, Mr. Thistlewick beamed.

“Well done, Apprentice,” he said. “The first repair… but not the last.”

Finn looked down at the pile of gears and springs that had been the Gearhound.

Somehow, he knew: the deeper he went, the harder it would get.

And somewhere beyond the next door, something much worse than a

Gearhound was already waiting.

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Chapter 5: The Rival Apprentice

The repaired gear floated back into the ceiling with a soft click, and the heavy door behind Finn creaked open wider, revealing a new corridor lined with dark iron mirrors.

Each mirror reflected Finn’s image — but in some, he was older, in others younger, and in a few… he wasn’t there at all.

“Come,” said Mr. Thistlewick, stepping through the doorway. “Your path grows more dangerous from here.”

As they walked, Finn couldn’t shake the feeling that someone — or something — was watching them from just beyond the reflections.

At the end of the corridor was another great door, but this one was slightly ajar. Soft laughter floated out — cold, mocking, and unfamiliar.

Finn and Mr. Thistlewick stepped inside.

The room beyond was circular, filled with more of the floating time-shards, but these shards were twisted — scenes inside them replayed again and again in endless loops, like broken memories.

Standing at the center was a boy, about Finn’s age.

He wore a black clockmaker’s coat stitched with silver thread, and in his hand was a jagged, dark version of Finn’s silver key. It pulsed with a sickly green light.

“So,” the boy said, smirking. “The new apprentice finally arrives.”

Mr. Thistlewick stiffened beside Finn.

“Malric,” he said grimly.

“Who’s he?” Finn whispered.

“My former apprentice,” Thistlewick replied. His voice was low and heavy. “The one who tried to control time, instead of serving it.”

Malric laughed and twirled his corrupted key between his fingers.

“You were always so boring, old man,” he said. “Rules, rules, rules. I prefer to make my own.”

Finn’s stomach churned. The way Malric spoke — so sure, so full of venom — made the air feel colder.

“You’re breaking the Heart,” said Mr. Thistlewick, his voice sharp. “You’re tearing Windmere apart!”

Malric’s grin widened.

“Exactly,” he said. “And soon, when the Heart finally shatters, I’ll rebuild it my way. A world where I control the past… and the future.”

He turned his burning gaze on Finn.

“And you, little apprentice,” Malric said mockingly, “you’ll have to choose. Stay loyal to this crumbling old man… or join me and rewrite time however you please.”

Finn gripped his silver key tightly. His heart pounded, his mind raced — the temptation was real. Fixing time was hard. Changing it, shaping it to his own wishes… was dangerously easy.

The room around them shimmered, mirrors warping, reality bending.

Malric extended his hand, green light swirling around him.

“What do you say, Finn?” he asked softly. “Will you help me… or try to stop me?”

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Chapter 6: The Choice

The world seemed to freeze.

The mirrors around Finn warped and twisted, showing flashes of possible futures:

— A version of himself standing beside Malric, wearing a black coat and smiling coldly.

— Another, standing alone in the ruins of Windmere, holding the shattered remains of the Heart of Time.

Finn’s hand tightened around the silver key.

He looked at Malric’s outstretched hand, then at Mr. Thistlewick, who stood silently behind him, waiting, trusting.

The choice seemed impossible.

Power… or duty?

Control… or hope?

“I…” Finn began, his voice shaking. “I will never help someone who wants to break the world just to rule it.”

Malric’s smile snapped into a snarl.

“So be it,” he hissed.

The green key in Malric’s hand flared. Instantly, shards of broken time flew from the walls, swirling around him like a living storm. The floor cracked beneath his feet, and the mirrors shattered, sending sharp fragments spinning through the air.

Finn barely had time to raise his own key. It glowed bright silver, forming a shimmering shield around him.

Malric hurled a jagged shard of frozen time straight at Finn’s chest.

Without thinking, Finn swung his key like a sword. The shard exploded into harmless light, but the force knocked him backward. He hit the stone floor hard, gasping for breath.

“You’re not strong enough!” Malric taunted, striding forward, green energy coiling around him.

“Time belongs to those who dare to seize it!”

Finn struggled to his feet. His hands were shaking, but deep inside, something else stirred — something stronger than fear.

It was the same feeling he’d had when he saved the Heart’s first broken gear.

A promise. A purpose.

Finn closed his eyes for a heartbeat. He listened — beyond the clash of magic, beyond Malric’s shouting — to the quiet ticking of the clocks, the steady pulse of the Heart of Time.

They believed in him.

He had to believe too.

Finn opened his eyes and lifted the silver key high. A beam of pure white light shot out, striking the ground between him and Malric.

The room shook. Time itself seemed to groan under their feet.

Malric stumbled back, shielding his eyes.

“You can’t win!” he shouted.

Finn’s voice rang out clear and steady:

“I’m not trying to win. I’m trying to fix what you broke.”

With a final surge of light, the silver key unleashed a wave of power that swept across the chamber. The broken shards of time fused back together, the walls repaired themselves, and the mirrors reflected only what was real once more.

When the light faded, Malric was gone — vanished into the cracks of time, leaving only a faint trace of green mist behind.

Mr. Thistlewick limped over and placed a hand on Finn’s shoulder.

“You chose wisely,” he said, pride in his voice.

But Finn could already feel it — the damage Malric had caused wasn’t finished.

Windmere was still fragile.

And Malric… wherever he was… would be back.

Sooner than anyone expected.

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Chapter 7: The First Mission

The sun was setting over Windmere when Finn stepped out of the shop’s hidden door. The town’s cobbled streets, bathed in golden light, seemed almost peaceful. Yet, beneath that calm exterior, Finn could feel something stirring. The clocks — still ticking in odd rhythms — were a constant reminder that something was wrong.

Finn adjusted the silver key in his pocket, its warmth steady against his side. After everything that had happened, it was hard to imagine that life could ever be the same. But Mr. Thistlewick had given him no time to linger.

“You’ve earned your first real mission,” the clockmaker had told him earlier, handing over a small, ornate scroll sealed with a dark, twisting symbol. “This is your task now, Finn. Go to the Clocktower of the Old North District. Something there is out of time.”

“Out of time?” Finn had repeated, unsure what that even meant.

“You’ll see soon enough,” Mr. Thistlewick had said. “Take the scroll. It will guide you.”

Now, standing at the edge of the town, Finn felt both nervous and determined. The Old North District was a place few people visited anymore. Its buildings, once grand, had fallen into disrepair, and the clocktower stood like a forgotten monument, its face cracked and its hands frozen.

As Finn approached the tower, the air grew heavier, the very ground beneath his feet seeming to pulse with energy. It was like walking through a dream, or a place where time had lost all meaning.

He reached the massive wooden door of the tower and gently pressed his palm against it. The silver key, now warm again, seemed to hum in response.

With a soft creak, the door opened — but not to the musty, dust-filled room Finn expected. Instead, the interior of the clocktower shimmered with an eerie, shifting light. Inside, the clock mechanisms were alive, spinning wildly, and the walls warped, bending as if the very structure itself were caught between moments in time.

“This is it,” Finn whispered to himself. “The heart of the fracture.”

He stepped inside, the door closing behind him with a quiet thud.

At the center of the tower stood a large, glowing clock face, suspended in midair. Its hands spun in every direction, moving forward, backward, and sideways in a chaotic dance. Around it were more shards of broken time, like pieces of a shattered mirror reflecting endless possibilities.

Finn unfurled the scroll Mr. Thistlewick had given him. The ink seemed to shift on the paper as he read aloud the ancient, swirling words:

“To restore what’s lost, follow the path of ticking light. Where time’s hands cross, and shadows fade, there lies the key to bind what’s broken.”

Finn frowned, looking around the chamber. The clock was so distorted, so unpredictable, that the path of ticking light wasn’t obvious.

Then, a faint glow flickered across the floor — a path of light, moving like a slow ripple, emerging from the spinning clock face. Without hesitating, Finn stepped forward.

The moment his foot crossed the first line of glowing light, the room seemed to pulse, and time bent once more. His surroundings shifted. The walls closed in, then expanded. A deep rumbling sound echoed from above, and Finn’s pulse quickened.

“Stay focused,” he muttered to himself, following the path as it twisted around the chamber. He could hear the tick-tick-tick of the clock’s heart, each beat feeling louder than the last.

At the end of the glowing path, Finn found a pedestal, atop which lay a small, ancient key — different from his own, but similar in shape. This was it — the key to restoring the clocktower, to undoing the damage.

But just as he reached for it, a cold laugh echoed through the chamber.

“You think you can fix what’s broken?” Malric’s voice, distant but unmistakable, filled the space. “I warned you, Finn. Time is mine to command.”

Finn spun around, the silver key glowing brightly in his hand. Time was already shifting, becoming more chaotic with every second. Malric’s figure flickered in and out of the shadows, always just out of reach, his laughter growing louder.

“You’re too late,” Malric taunted, his voice echoing through the fractured moments. “The clock is already beyond your control.”

But Finn didn’t hesitate. He reached for the key, lifting it high. It pulsed with light as if responding to the danger in the air.

“Not if I can help it,” Finn said, determination in his voice.

With a deep breath, he plunged the key into the pedestal. A shockwave of energy burst through the tower, pushing Malric’s voice back into the shadows.

The clock face stopped its wild spinning, its hands freezing in place. The fractures in time began to seal. And as the light dimmed, Finn felt the heavy weight of the moment — the weight of the choice he had made, the duty that now lay on his shoulders.

But he knew this was only the beginning.

The battle was far from over.

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Chapter 8: Echoes of the Past

The clocktower’s pulse gradually settled into a steady rhythm, but Finn didn’t feel any relief. The weight of the moment lingered in the air, thick with uncertainty. As the light dimmed, revealing the tower’s familiar walls once more, Finn could feel the faintest hum of something not quite right.

The ancient key he had used to restore the clocktower’s heart still gleamed softly in his hand, its edges cool against his palm.

For a few seconds, nothing happened. Then, the air seemed to warp around him, distorting the room like ripples in a pond.

Suddenly, the familiar creak of a clock’s hands shifting echoed through the tower. But this time, it wasn’t coming from the tower itself.

A shadow stretched across the floor — too large to be the work of the spinning clock hands.

Finn turned around. He hadn’t seen it before, but now, in the corner of the tower, stood a small mirror. The surface shimmered, as though it were alive. Finn felt a pull in his chest — an almost magnetic force urging him closer.

Curious, he stepped toward it.

As he neared, the mirror seemed to melt and ripple like water, revealing not his own reflection, but a scene from the past. It was blurry at first, but soon, he could make out the figures of two men, both dressed in worn clockmaker coats. One of them was much older, his hair graying and face lined with age. The other was young — far younger than Finn had expected.

The young man was laughing. And the older one, Mr. Thistlewick, looked… different. More intense. His eyes shone with purpose, but there was something in his expression that Finn couldn’t quite place.

“You’re ready, aren’t you, Malric?” the younger man said, voice full of excitement.

Malric? Finn’s heart skipped a beat. This couldn’t be right. Malric had been an apprentice once? Finn’s gaze flickered between the scene and the old clockmaker. Was this before the betrayal? Before everything fell apart?

Mr. Thistlewick nodded slowly, eyes serious. “You are ready, but remember, this path… it will change you. It changes everything.”

Finn’s breath caught in his throat. The words felt familiar, like a warning he’d heard before — but he didn’t understand. Malric had started out as an apprentice, just like him.

The vision in the mirror flickered. The two figures in the reflection turned to a large, glowing clock, its face cracked, its hands spinning too fast. It was the same one Finn had seen before — the one in the heart of the tower.

Suddenly, the reflection shattered, leaving only a faint outline of Malric’s smirking face.

“You think you’ve won, Finn,” the voice echoed, much clearer now, coming from the mirror. “But this is just the beginning. The clock’s brokenness runs deeper than you realize. And you can’t fix it. Not without me.”

Finn backed away, pulse racing. The mirror flickered again, and with a final laugh from Malric, the vision disappeared.

He stood there for a moment, heart pounding, his breath heavy in the stillness of the tower. The image of Malric’s face, full of smug confidence, burned into his mind. Finn was certain of one thing now: Malric was always two steps ahead. He had been planning this, even before Finn had become an apprentice.

“Malric… You can’t win,” Finn whispered to himself, even though he wasn’t sure anymore. What if he’s right? The tower felt different now — as though something had been unlocked, something deep inside, that Finn couldn’t yet understand.

But Finn had no time for doubt.

He turned away from the mirror and walked toward the tower’s entrance, determination settling in his chest like a solid weight.

The battle’s just begun, he thought. But I won’t let him win.

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Chapter 9: The Secret in the Gears

The streets of Windmere were dark by the time Finn stepped outside the clocktower.

The last slivers of sunlight had vanished, replaced by a thick mist curling through the alleys.

It wasn’t natural — Finn could feel it, like the fog was alive, whispering strange things just beyond his hearing.

He tightened his grip on the silver key and hurried back toward Mr. Thistlewick’s shop.

Every clock he passed ticked out of rhythm — some sped up wildly, others slowed until they almost stopped. It was like the whole town was caught in some invisible tug-of-war.

When Finn finally burst through the hidden door behind the shop, Mr. Thistlewick was already waiting.

He sat at the large oak table, stacks of dusty books and scattered clock parts spread out around him.

His expression was grim.

“You felt it too, didn’t you?” Finn said, still catching his breath.

Thistlewick nodded slowly.

“The balance is slipping faster than I feared,” he said. “Malric must have found the Lost Gear.”

Finn blinked.

“The Lost Gear? What’s that?”

The clockmaker pushed a heavy, leather-bound book toward Finn.

The pages were yellowed and brittle with age. On one page was a drawing of an enormous gear, etched with strange runes, half-hidden in shadow.

“It’s a fragment of the first clock,” Thistlewick said quietly. “The Heart of Time itself. Long ago, when the first clock shattered, one piece went missing. It was said to carry the power to rewrite entire eras.”

Finn stared at the picture.

“If Malric has it—”

“He doesn’t,” Thistlewick cut in. “Not yet. But he’s close.”

Finn swallowed hard. “Then we have to find it first.”

The clockmaker gave him a long, searching look.

“You’ve proven yourself,” he said finally. “You’re ready for the truth.”

Thistlewick stood, motioned for Finn to follow, and led him down a narrow staircase beneath the shop — a staircase Finn had never noticed before.

The air grew colder as they descended, and the walls were lined with old clocks, each one stuck at a different time.

At the bottom was a small stone chamber, empty except for a single, ancient-looking clock standing against the far wall.

It wasn’t ticking.

It wasn’t even moving.

“This,” said Thistlewick, “is the First Gear’s twin. Its sister piece. It’s the only thing that can find the Lost Gear.”

Finn stepped closer. The clock had no numbers, no hands — just a hollow center where something once turned.

He looked up at Thistlewick.

“But it’s broken.”

The old man smiled, a glint of pride in his eyes.

“That’s why you’re here.”

Finn understood. This was his real test — not just to repair a broken clock, but to restore a piece of time itself.

He reached into his pocket, feeling the comforting weight of the silver key.

“I’ll fix it,” Finn said, his voice steady. “I promise.”

Thistlewick nodded.

“And when you do… we’ll finally be able to find Malric.”

But as Finn placed the key into the hollow center of the clock, a faint tremor shook the room.

Somewhere, deep in the winding gears of Windmere, something woke up — and the faint, cold laughter of Malric echoed once more through the walls.

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Chapter 10: The Trial of the Gear

The moment Finn placed the silver key into the hollow center of the ancient clock, the world around him seemed to tilt.

The air grew dense and heavy, pressing down on his shoulders.

The old stone walls faded into darkness.

He tried to step back — but found he couldn’t move.

The clock had trapped him.

A low, resonant ticking filled the air, slow and deliberate, like the heartbeat of something vast and ancient.

Then, from the darkness, a figure emerged.

It wasn’t Malric.

It was a woman — tall and cloaked in robes of shimmering starlight, her face hidden by a silver mask shaped like a clock’s face.

She spoke without moving her lips, her voice soft but commanding.

“To mend the broken gear, you must first prove you understand the burden of time.”

Finn’s heart pounded. He clutched the silver key tighter, unsure what was about to happen.

The woman raised one hand. Three shimmering portals opened in the dark — each one showing a different scene:

In the first portal, Finn saw himself standing back at the Clocktower, but this time he failed to restore it. Windmere crumbled into ruin, and shadowy creatures spilled out into the streets.

In the second portal, he saw himself accepting Malric’s offer — ruling at his side, wielding unimaginable power, but looking cold and empty inside.

In the third portal, he saw himself leaving Windmere behind — running away from the responsibility, living a quiet, lonely life where no one even remembered the broken clocks.

The woman’s voice echoed again:

“Choose.”

Finn stared at the three futures.

Each one was wrong in its own way.

Each one scared him.

“I don’t want any of them,” he said, stepping back.

“You must choose,” the voice insisted.

“Time demands a price. You cannot pass without a choice.”

Finn closed his eyes.

He thought of Windmere — its crooked streets, its chiming clocks, its people who didn’t even realize how close they were to losing everything.

He thought of Mr. Thistlewick, who had trusted him with the silver key.

And he thought of himself — not the version Malric had wanted, not the scared boy who wanted to run — but the boy who had stood in the broken clocktower and fought for what was right.

Finn opened his eyes.

“I choose none of your futures,” he said. His voice was stronger than he felt. “I’ll make my own.”

For a heartbeat, there was silence.

Then — the woman smiled behind the silver mask.

The portals shattered like glass, and the darkness peeled away.

The chamber reappeared around him, brighter now, filled with a steady, golden glow.

The ancient clock before him clicked once — and began to turn.

Tiny gears spun into place. The hollow center sealed with a soft hum.

The silver key slid free into Finn’s hand, now gleaming with new etchings along its blade — symbols he didn’t recognize yet, but somehow understood to be ancient words for trust, time, and hope.

Mr. Thistlewick’s voice called faintly from somewhere above:

“Finn! Are you alright?”

Finn grinned, his chest full of a fierce, bright energy.

“I’m fine!” he called back.

He turned and looked once more at the now-complete clock.

Deep within its golden gears, a new light flickered to life — a map.

Not of Windmere — but of somewhere deeper. A place outside the normal flow of time.

The place where Malric was hiding.

Finn tucked the silver key safely back into his coat and climbed the stone steps back toward the shop, the weight of the coming journey pressing against him.

But he was ready now.

More ready than he had ever been.

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Chapter 11: Into the Timeless Paths

The map inside the ancient clock was unlike anything Finn had ever seen.

It wasn’t made of parchment or ink — it shimmered in the air, a web of glowing lines and shifting symbols, each point pulsing softly like a heartbeat.

The paths twisted and turned, folding over themselves in ways that didn’t make sense — like a puzzle where up and down, forward and backward had no meaning.

Mr. Thistlewick stood beside Finn, his brow furrowed.

“The Timeless Paths,” he said, almost whispering. “Few have walked them and returned. They’re the broken threads of time itself — places that don’t obey our rules. If Malric is hiding there…” He trailed off, worry flickering across his face.

Finn felt the silver key warm again against his chest. He knew what he had to do.

“I have to follow him,” Finn said quietly. “Before he finds the Lost Gear.”

Thistlewick hesitated, then placed a firm hand on Finn’s shoulder.

“You won’t be alone,” he said. “There are others who guard the paths. Friends… and foes. Trust your instincts. And remember — sometimes the shortest way forward is not a straight line.”

Finn nodded, committing every word to memory.

The ancient clock’s gears clicked again, and the map shimmered brighter. A single path began to glow — thin and winding — leading into the unknown.

Finn stepped forward.

The moment his foot touched the glowing thread, the world around him shifted.

The shop, Thistlewick, Windmere — all of it peeled away like mist blown by a fierce wind.

He was standing in a vast expanse of shifting colors, a sky with no stars, a ground made of swirling mist.

Strange clock towers floated upside down, twisting slowly in the air.

Rivers ran backward.

Mountains crumbled and re-formed before his eyes.

And in the far distance, barely visible, was a faint flicker of dark light — the direction Malric had gone.

Finn tightened his grip on the silver key and took a cautious step forward.

The ground rippled under his feet, but the glowing path held steady, leading him onward.

As he walked, he noticed odd figures drifting near the path — tall, robed shapes with blank clock faces instead of heads. They didn’t move aggressively, but Finn could feel their cold gaze on him.

One of them drifted closer, whispering in a voice that sounded like the turning of old pages:

“Traveler of broken time… what do you seek?”

Finn hesitated, remembering Thistlewick’s warning: trust your instincts.

“I seek to repair what’s been broken,” Finn said steadily. “To stop the one who would tear it apart.”

The figure tilted its head slowly, the hands on its clock-face ticking backward.

Then it floated aside, clearing the way.

Finn let out a slow breath and kept moving.

The path wound tighter, spiraling into a great arch made of shattered clocks.

Beyond it, he could see a flickering gate — a rift of darkness, pulsing with power.

Finn’s heart raced.

He knew instinctively: Malric was just beyond that gate.

But as he drew closer, the mist around him thickened, and a new figure stepped into his path — this time solid and clear.

It was a boy about Finn’s age, with sharp gray eyes and a wicked grin.

“You’re brave to come this far,” the boy said, spinning a small, black key between his fingers. “But brave doesn’t mean smart.”

Finn tensed.

This wasn’t just another shadow.

This was a real challenger — someone Malric had sent to stop him.

And Finn could tell from the way the boy smiled:

He wasn’t planning on letting Finn reach that gate without a fight.

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Chapter 12: Duel of the Keys

Finn squared his shoulders, facing the boy with the black key.

The mist around them thickened, forming a ring — a boundary, as if the Timeless Paths themselves demanded that they settle this here and now.

The boy twirled his key lazily between his fingers.

He looked relaxed, almost bored, but Finn could feel the sharpness underneath — like a knife hidden under silk.

“You’re wasting your time,” the boy said. His voice was casual, but every word felt like a trap.

“Malric’s already ahead of you. Why not turn back before you get hurt?”

Finn didn’t answer.

Instead, he slid his silver key into his palm, feeling it pulse gently — not with fear, but with a steady, reassuring rhythm.

A reminder: you are not alone.

The boy chuckled.

“Fine. Your mistake.”

With a flick of his wrist, the black key flared to life, casting sharp, jagged shadows across the mist.

Gears made of darkness spun into existence around him, forming a twisted clockwork shield.

Finn took a deep breath.

If this was going to be a duel, he needed to be smart. This wasn’t about brute strength — it was about understanding time.

The boy lunged first.

His black key slashed through the air, and dark gears shot toward Finn like razor-edged blades.

Finn dodged, feeling the sting of one gear graze his shoulder, and thrust his silver key outward.

A burst of shimmering light answered his call, creating a spinning barrier of shining gears.

For a moment, the two forces collided — silver and black — pushing against each other in a whirl of ticking energy.

“You’re strong,” the boy admitted, circling. “Stronger than most. But strength isn’t enough here.”

He thrust his black key into the misty ground — and instantly, time around Finn fractured.

The world slowed, then sped up, then slowed again, throwing off Finn’s balance.

Finn stumbled, clutching at the path beneath him.

Think, think! he told himself.

Malric’s tricks are all about distortion. Breaking time’s flow.

Finn gritted his teeth and focused.

He pressed the silver key to his chest, letting it pulse. He remembered what Thistlewick had said: Sometimes the shortest way forward isn’t a straight line.

Instead of fighting the fractured flow, Finn moved with it.

When time slowed, he moved slowly too.

When it sped up, he used the extra momentum to dodge and weave.

He became part of the broken rhythm, dancing through the attacks, drawing closer with every heartbeat.

The boy’s eyes widened in surprise — just a fraction too late.

With a burst of speed, Finn lunged forward, locking his key against the black one.

The mist surged around them, crackling with energy.

For a moment, it was like the two were locked between seconds, neither gaining ground.

But Finn didn’t need to overpower him.

He just needed to shift the pattern.

With a quick twist of his silver key, Finn redirected the energy — not against the boy, but into the mist around them.

The mist shimmered, twisting the ring of battle itself.

The dark gears broke apart, scattering like leaves in a storm.

The boy stumbled backward, his black key flickering.

Finn stood tall, chest heaving, silver key burning bright in his hand.

The boy stared at him, wide-eyed — then grinned, almost approvingly.

“Maybe you’re not wasting your time after all,” he said, stepping aside.

Finn didn’t wait.

He sprinted toward the flickering gate, feeling the mist part before him.

Behind him, the boy’s voice floated through the mist:

“Good luck, clock mender. You’re going to need it.”

Finn didn’t look back.

He plunged through the gate, into the darkness beyond — toward Malric, toward the Lost Gear, and toward a battle that would decide the fate of time itself.

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Chapter 13: Malric’s Domain

As Finn passed through the flickering gate, he felt the world fold around him.

It was like diving into deep water — cold, disorienting, endless.

For a moment, there was nothing but swirling darkness, full of strange, distant ticking sounds.

Then, with a jolt, he landed.

He stood at the edge of a massive, shattered city.

Twisted clock towers leaned at impossible angles.

Bridges floated in midair, broken at both ends but somehow still standing.

The sky above was cracked like old glass, with streams of dark light leaking through.

This was no normal place.

This was Malric’s Domain — a place outside of time, built from stolen seconds and broken moments.

Finn tightened his grip on the silver key, which glowed faintly, casting a pale light around him.

The path ahead was clear — a road paved with black stone, leading straight toward the center of the city.

And at the very center, rising higher than any tower Finn had ever seen, was a colossal clock — its hands spinning in all directions at once, tearing holes in the sky.

The Lost Gear must be there, Finn thought.

As he moved forward, the air grew colder.

Whispers curled around him — fragments of voices, pieces of conversations that had never happened:

“He’ll never make it…”

“Time belongs to Malric now…”

“Give up…”

Finn gritted his teeth and pressed on.

Halfway across the bridge, the ground shuddered beneath him.

From the shadows, creatures emerged — twisted, gear-like beings with hollow eyes and spinning metal limbs.

They clattered and hissed as they moved, like broken clocks desperately trying to tick.

Finn raised his key, ready to defend himself.

But instead of attacking, the creatures bowed — a low, creaking movement — and parted, clearing the path.

A figure walked toward him.

Malric.

He looked almost human — tall, cloaked in deep blue and black, with silver streaks running through his dark hair.

But his eyes were wrong — golden and cold, like twin clock faces stuck at midnight.

“So,” Malric said, smiling faintly. “The little mender finally arrives.”

Finn didn’t answer.

Malric’s smile widened.

“You’ve done well,” he said, almost admiring. “Better than I expected. You even beat my champion on the Timeless Paths. Impressive.”

Finn lifted the silver key slightly.

“I’m not here for your approval,” he said. “I’m here to stop you.”

Malric laughed — a deep, unsettling sound.

“Stop me?” he echoed. “You still don’t understand, boy. Time isn’t something you protect. It’s something you command.”

He raised his hand, and behind him, the colossal clock shuddered, its gears grinding against reality itself.

“I’m offering you a place beside me,” Malric said.

“Together, we could remake the timeline. Fix every mistake, erase every loss. You want that, don’t you?”

For a moment, Finn hesitated.

The idea was tempting — painfully tempting.

He thought of all the wrong things he could undo.

All the losses he could erase.

But then he remembered what Thistlewick had told him:

Time’s value isn’t in its perfection. It’s in its imperfection — in its choices.

Finn stepped forward, silver key gleaming.

“I choose the real timeline,” he said firmly. “The messy, beautiful, broken one.”

Malric’s face darkened.

“So be it,” he snarled.

With a roar, the ground shattered — and the colossal clock behind him began to collapse inward, gears flying like shrapnel.

Finn braced himself.

The final battle had begun.

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Chapter 14: Battle for the Broken Clock

The ground beneath Finn split open, sending shockwaves through the shattered city.

Broken gears spun through the air like blades.

Time itself — the invisible thread that held everything together — trembled.

Malric stood at the center of the chaos, arms raised, drawing power from the collapsing clock behind him.

Dark streams of stolen seconds and shattered memories wrapped around him like a storm.

“You should have joined me,” Malric growled, his golden eyes blazing.

“Now, you’ll be lost to time — just another crack in the wheel!”

Finn planted his feet and raised the silver key, which flared to life in his hand, burning brighter than ever.

He could feel the key’s power now — not just to unlock, but to mend. To heal.

The colossal clock groaned and splintered, sending massive fragments flying toward Finn.

He thrust the key forward, tracing a circle in the air — and with a sharp pulse of energy, a shield of shining gears materialized around him, deflecting the debris.

Malric snarled and hurled more broken time at him:

scenes from a thousand lost futures, desperate to drag Finn under — visions of failure, of regret, of fear.

Finn gritted his teeth.

He felt each vision trying to pull him apart, but he held firm.

This is not real, he reminded himself. I choose my own future.

He charged forward, weaving through the storm of broken time.

Malric met him halfway.

Their keys clashed with a blast of force that sent ripples through the air.

Silver light collided with dark shadows, each strike tearing the ground and warping the sky.

Malric fought with rage — fierce and wild.

Finn fought with purpose — steady and sharp.

As they dueled, Finn began to see it:

Malric was powerful, but he was unstable. His control over time was like a cracked dam — barely holding together.

Every time he stole a moment, it made him stronger but also more fragile.

Finn needed to break that dam wide open.

Dodging a vicious swipe, Finn darted around Malric, sprinting toward the colossal clock’s exposed core — a swirling knot of gears and light at its center.

Malric roared and gave chase, throwing jagged fragments of broken time at him.

One nearly clipped Finn’s leg, and he stumbled — but the silver key pulsed again, steadying him.

“Follow the ticking light,” Finn remembered the scroll’s words.

“Where time’s hands cross, there lies the key to bind what’s broken.”

He spotted it — a single glowing gear, suspended in the heart of the broken clock, untouched by the chaos around it.

The true Lost Gear.

Finn leapt, the silver key outstretched.

Malric screamed in fury, throwing one final blast of dark energy at him.

But Finn was faster.

With a fierce cry, he plunged the silver key into the glowing gear.

There was a sound like a thousand clocks striking midnight all at once.

The world exploded in light.

The dark energy unraveled.

Malric was thrown backward, his power ripping away like smoke in a windstorm.

The shattered city trembled — then began to knit itself back together, piece by piece.

Finn dropped to one knee, gasping for breath.

He looked up and saw Malric lying in the rubble, the golden light gone from his eyes, his body looking strangely small and empty.

The colossal clock — no longer spinning wildly — ticked once.

A true, steady sound.

Time was healing.

Finn stood, feeling the silver key hum softly in his hand.

It wasn’t just a key anymore — it was a promise.

He had done it.

The battle for the broken clock was over.

But the journey of a Clockmender had only just begun.

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Chapter 15: The Price of Victory

Finn stepped through the last of the collapsing mist and found himself standing once more in Windmere.

The crooked rooftops, the cobbled streets, the distant sound of the market bells — it was all there.

But something was different.

The air felt lighter, the clocks ticking in steady, even rhythms once more.

The world — his world — was healing.

Finn looked down at the silver key in his hand.

It still pulsed faintly, but it had changed — the once-smooth metal now bore fine cracks, like a porcelain cup glued carefully back together.

He knew what that meant.

The key had done its job. It had mended the greatest fracture.

But in doing so, it had exhausted much of its power.

Finn tucked it carefully into his pocket and started down the familiar streets, toward Mr. Thistlewick’s shop.

As he walked, people turned to look at him — not with suspicion or fear, but with a strange kind of recognition.

Like they knew, somehow, that the boy who had left was not the same one who returned.

The great clock tower in the center of town struck the hour — clear and strong.

Bong.

Bong.

Bong.

Each chime seemed to echo deeper than sound, as if it were striking something inside Finn himself.

When he reached the shop, the bell above the door jingled just the same as always.

The familiar scent of oil and parchment filled the air.

Mr. Thistlewick looked up from his workbench, a faint smile tugging at the corners of his mouth.

“You made it,” he said simply.

Finn nodded.

Thistlewick stood and crossed the room, his eyes searching Finn’s face carefully — not for wounds, but for the more subtle marks:

the weight of choices, the price of responsibility.

Without a word, Finn held out the silver key.

Thistlewick took it gently, inspecting the fine cracks, and nodded grimly.

“You’ve done well,” he said. “Better than I hoped. But… you’ve seen it now, haven’t you? The truth.”

Finn swallowed.

He knew exactly what the clockmaker meant.

Time could be mended.

But it could never be made perfect.

There would always be cracks.

Always choices.

Always losses that couldn’t be undone.

And Finn — whether he liked it or not — had become a keeper of those choices.

A Clockmender.

Thistlewick placed the silver key on the workbench, beside a new piece of clockwork he had been building: a delicate mechanism shaped like a star, still incomplete.

“You have a decision to make,” Thistlewick said.

“You can stay here, in Windmere. Live your life. The world will heal, and time will tick on.”

He looked up, meeting Finn’s gaze.

“Or… you can walk the Timeless Paths again. Find the other fractures. There are more, you know. Always more.

And now, you have the knowledge — and the courage — to mend them.”

Finn looked at the star-shaped mechanism, then at the cracked silver key.

His heart was heavy, but also full — full of purpose.

He knew what he would choose.

He smiled, a quiet, determined smile.

“I’m not done yet,” he said.

Thistlewick chuckled — a warm, proud sound.

“No,” he agreed. “You’re just getting started.”

THE END


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