Tears of Rose

by Caleb Timmins

The years of war in the year of 2010 had an effect on everyone. the year of 2010 was a civil war in the United States, were gangs were trying to take control of the government. Corporations hired present day ninja, commonly known as "hunters" to kill gangs that casused local problems. As you read this story, think of this, who is the hero, and who is the bad guy.

New York, spring of 2010.

As night fell, a group of gang memebers known as the "daggers" sat in the park, smoking ciggerettes. There were three, spok, eddie, tyson. All of them were loud, rude, and stupid. They laughed about girls, money, or some recent cop they killed.

Eddie spoke in a sly voice, "you guys think we gonna ever kill a hunter" Spok and Tyson laughed, knowing that would never happened. Spok pushed his over weight body up, said he had to go the bathroom, and headed towards the bushes. As he unzipped his jeans, a large figure jumped from a nearvy tree, jumping on him, and crushing his skull . Tyson and Eddie heard the crack, "Spoke, are you alright, homie?" Suddenly , a dark figure Ran from the shadows, Grabbed Eddie, and dragged him up a tree. His screams echoed from the trees. Tyson ran, but not before he tripped over the park bench. He stood up, looking for the hunter, but didnt spot him. But suddenly, he relized, "he's right behind me" They stood back to back, And the huter raised his blade, and shoved it into Tysons back.

The hunter stood there, breathing in the fresh air. He was after the daggers for days, and he made sure that they paid for putting the girl he loved into a deep coma. As he ran to his hideout, he removed his gear. He opened a door to an apartment he rented and walked in. The room looked like a cross between a lab and a weird voodoo combination. the hunter, whos real name was ghunsu, was trying to use alchemy ( a cross between science and sorcery) to bring the girl he loved, rose, back to her normal state. He turned on the light, and walked over to rose, who lie on an operation table.

"I will heal you, i promise" he kissed her on the cheek as a tear fell from his eye.


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