KenyaP


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  • A suspenseful story that seems incomplete. You need to expand this further. Some questions that the story generate for me were why would a 19 year-old girl call a 16 year-old girl 'little'? Stacy found a running car with lots of blood in it. Was this the 16 year-old's car? or the perpetrator's car? Where was the blood in the car? In the driver's seat, passenger seat, or in the back seat? Stacy heard the cries for help in the woods that led her to the bleeding girl. Can you describe where the wounds were that bled uncontrollably? If the cries for help lead her to the girl, why was it too late?
    Lots of questions. Expand your story and give us the answers.