Thank you. Someone once commented before that I had a similar style to Hemingway - I was very flattered. Ambrose Bierce I know little about. To be honest I don't think I'm that good a writer, but I guess I have my moments. Thanks again.
It was alright. Maybe looking into Ernest Hemingway and Ambrose Bierce could help develop that sense of tension and compulsion to make your writing more powerful. Thank you for the piece.
An existential piece with simple writing that shows a character who is young and exploring the world. Young yet mature, expressed by the ending sentence. Nice one.
Thanks for the feedback Andre. The story is based upon a dream and when I analysed it I realized that the subconscious was really attempting to draw my attention to, perhaps the uncomfortable, notion that all I was was a dream in the mind of God.
I liked it, though the third part was less entertaining. Still an interesting minimalism.