B B


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I'm a mystery with a pretty smile :)

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  • I don't use this word very often in my reviews, but "Wow!" Not only did you do an outstanding technical job of writing this and demonstrate a keen talent for story-telling, but the subject is one I could not resist. I've been there, you see, in that room with tubes and wires and beeping sounds. Now 65, they split my chest open the first time when I was 43, and I've now had too many procedures to list. I know that feeling so well, of looking out the window and wanting to be out there, running. Thank you for writing this.

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  • From KarimJessa on Runaway Hearts

    Yasmeen, you've certainly gone deep into the heart of Jasmine, almost your namesake.

    Very well written. For a moment I was scared Jasmine was hearing this boy's voice because she was dying, and so entering into that other heavenly life before darkness closes in.

    I'm glad it turned out otherwise. Though the thought of that unknown boy will continue to haunt.

    Once again, very good.

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