Ben Cross


Bio

This is my first short story submission and am eagerly anticipating critiques and constructive criticism, assisting me in improve my craft. I am 22 years old, live in Houston Texas and am engaged to be married the first week of April of this year! Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and I sincerely hope you enjoyed it. Heaven Fire was written with intent of being a series of short stories. So if you have any ideas or would just like to express general interest in what happens next, please don't hesitate to comment or email me SaraHazlip09@hotmail.com Thank you again and God Bless! -ben

Joined
January 2013

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January 2013

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  • Nice job. :D I enjoyed this story

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  • I like this piece a lot. The pace and "feel" kept my interest. I also like the description, and how well the words flowed and were put together.

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  • From Colette Breeze on Heaven Fire

    Interesting extract, I coul dimagine reading on and discovering more wierd and wonderful experiences with this boy through you.!Well written,and worth the read!Colette Breeze

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