E.D.Cota


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  • From J.C McElheny on Final Grade

    good writing. Very engaging. I got the ending, but it could be a bit clearer. Maybe drop some (more) foreshadowing in the earlier parts of the story.

    Good overall, though. I liked it.

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  • From Steven T. on Final Grade

    I enjoyed the story Cota, it was almost as if I was there my self. The sights, sounds and emotions. At the end I got confused, I wasn't sure if she was the one in the casket or her husband? I had to go back and read half again, and I'm still not quiet sure who was in the casket, because at the begining you mentioned that her dad helped her to a seat. Yet I feel as if she was the one being lowered into the ground not some one else.

    Over all great read, nice detal. Thanks for posting.

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